The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
I loved his running commentary to Holly, and the great ending sentence. A lump-in-the-throat story, my favorite kind.
01/12/07
I really enjoyed this read! SO REAL! I have a special place in my heart for victims of this debilitating disease and for their relatives !
What a beautiful love story. I like the appreciation, thankfulness, and tenderness expressed throughout by Holly's husband. Great writing!
This is one of the best stories I have read since I began reading Writing Challenge entries in June. It was crafted perfectly with many memorable lines.
01/18/07
Stunningly wonderful and beautiful, dear friend, and VERY worthy of this EC placing. Congrats!
Congratulations on placing! I still think it's a truly outstanding piece! Verna
Congratulations on placing! I still think it's a truly outstanding piece! Verna
Way to go, Marilee! Congratulations on your well-deserved win in advanced and your EC placement, too!
01/18/07
Congratulations on placing so high with your beautifully crafted story.
01/18/07
Marilee, congratulations on your EC!!!
An outstanding job. You just keep getting better and better. I knew I was a good judge of talent when I read one of your first efforts. Excellent writing and God bless.