The Official Writing Challenge
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Well characterized appliances - and I loved the subtle jokes. Though I must ask, who was the "Squat, pale white form"?

God bless,

Kevin
Creative and cute. An enjoyable read.
01/11/07
Cute, I almost expected to hear rimshots after the jokes. I got lost a few times and had to re-read the story in places. Overall, very creative.
01/15/07
Fun and creative! I'm sure you had a blast writing this (I did one similar for another challenge and I know I did!).