The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/07
this is a sweet stroy! I sure recognize the 'attitude' in myself sometimes--being an at-home, traditional wife is tough! I like the resolution, ifnding her new plan in the Bible. There are a couple of technical things, but this isn't the critique circle. If you'd like that type of review IM me. Good write, good story. Thanks for sharing! Deb
01/12/07
I enjoyed the slow conversion of your main character's attitude. I think we can all see ourselves in this one.
01/14/07
This is so encouraging. I'm guilty of sometimes loathing cooking. You've reminded me it's a ministry, not just for family, but for the Lord. Thank you!