The Official Writing Challenge
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01/11/07
I've got to say that this sounds absolutely delicious! You're very blessed to have such a talented hubby.

From a reader's standpoint, it would be more pleasing to have this separated into several shorter paragraphs.
I can identify with this because my first husband was a professional chef and a much better cook than me. Being a good cook is a wonderful gift (hospitality?) and I applaud your hubby for putting his talents to good use. Thanks for sharing.
01/11/07
It's wonderful to have a hubby so willing to take care of you. I'm blessed with one also.

I think some reformatting would make it more readable.

Love the wonderful thoughts.
Thanks for the wonderful comments and suggestions. hmmm...paragraphs...I'll work on that. This is my first article I write poetry. I'll work on the paragraphs next article. God's blessings to you all.