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Powerful story! The "unconscious impulse" seemed to be a POV shift, but otherwise great story!
12/14/06
The Unsung heroism of intercession! Only God knows. Very nice story. God bless.
This was beautifully written. Thank God for prayer warriors!
12/15/06
You wrote about my grandmother! That was so sweet of you - thank you - indeed, she was truly an 'unsung hero'. Oh - it wasn't specifically her? Anyhow, it is beautifully written and powerful because it is true.
12/16/06
What a clever take on the topic. I love the way your words flowed to communicate such a powerful message. Great job.
Love the imagery and how you interspersed scripture. Read it several times. Thank you.
Wow! This pulls the reader into another realm and then carries him along powerfully!

I could picture her entering her prayer closet....but then opening her heart to embrace the fullness of Christ! Awesome!!!

12/19/06
Very powerful. You've captured the battle of the intercessor beautifully. Your words captivated me. Thank you.
12/19/06
This is soooooo good! I know a few prayer warriors like this, and they are powerful, powerful people. Thanks for putting them to words.
12/19/06
What a wonderful description of the battle a prayer intercessor and warrior undertakes when she comes seeking the Lord's Presence face for others. Gave me chills.
12/19/06
This is wonderfully vivid, atmospheric, and unique. Loved it!
Beatifully written. This is awesome.
12/19/06
Wow! The imagery here is so incredible. I was enthralled by this account and loved your depiction of this unsung hero. Thanks so much for sharing this.
12/20/06
Loved the intensity of the fight contrasted with her peace and rest after she had done her task. Powerful.
12/20/06
Deep and powerful. Evocative and profound take on the topic.
the imagery was the best part! Great writing.