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12/14/06
Beautiful story of heroism at its finest. Great job.
12/14/06
Right on topic. A very moving story that inspires. Well done. God bless.
A hero indeed. Well done. I loved the whole thing and the line about Justin's giving attitude ("It's okay, Mom," Justin told her. "Don't worry. You take care of John now. I'll do it when I'm bigger. We'll take turns.) almost made me cry.
12/15/06
Such a beautiful story. The ending was very powerful and really touched my heart.
This was touching. A heart of such loving sacrifice comes from our Father.
Tough...but tender and touching. I could picture John saying, "Howa YOU....?" and found myself wanting to reach out and give him a hug.



12/19/06
Oh, how lovely. Thank God for moms like this who see the precious gift in these children. Thanks so much for sharing this touching story.