The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/06
Beautiful. God bless.
12/16/06
Magnificent! I read each paragraph with increasing joy and awe--and the last one was simply astounding. Wonderful title, too.
Wow. This is awesome. So creative and beautiful. I hope it places in the EC!
I read this three times to let it sink in!

Awesome description:

"When it was over; when the earth had shuddered and the skies had screamed, Eliyahu discovered that all music was lost. Heaven was silent. A mute alien had entered; had visited every corner. Her name was Pain."

12/20/06
Amazingly vivid and poetic. You used the music to a perfect effect throughout. I feel like I can't compliment this properly - as it deserves - but know I am completely in awe.
12/20/06
Wow ... I felt as if I could actually HEAR the images in this masterful story. Well done! Bravissima! Thanks for sharing it
12/21/06
There you go, writing above the master category again!!! Do you know how hard it is to judge that!!! LOL I absolutely love this Helen. You rock!!