The Official Writing Challenge
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12/14/06
I thought maybe you were heading in that direction and I'm glad you did. Very kool. I enjoyed the read. I could smell the ice of the rink. Good and aching memories. God bless.
Actually, this blind-sided me.
Which only made the ending more fun.
12/15/06
I was hoping/wondering if "I" was a girl. When I skimmed ahead and saw that you were, I almost got teary. Great ending!
12/15/06
A very vivid telling, and I enjoyed the punch.
Ooooh, this was a fun one to read. Good character development of Mr. B. I honestly didn't see the "I" being a girl until the end!! Good job! :-)
12/21/06
I love your real-life stories, Lynda. And, your unsung hero is one of those gems who encourage from behind the scenes and make such a crucial difference in a child's life. I'm assuming you're "Helen," and I hope you are writing your memoirs so I can buy the book :)