The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
I enjoyed this very much - balm to the soul when we wonder if anything we did, or said, made a difference. Good job.
12/10/06
Such a tender and heartwarming story. Excellent characterization. I really enjoyed this!
12/11/06
I really like your descriptions of the crash and how he reacted. I liked the dialogue between the two men - I wondered what happened to everyone else though and why that wasn't part of his concern. But I loved the ending and my favorite sentence was when he said I read all those books but I live by the Bible.:) Great writing!
12/11/06
I was blind, but now I see. It is the story of our lives when we allow Him to lead us! Good job. Blessings, Cheri
Great story. I love to read the stories from the "Masters". I have so much still to learn; I feel like I am receiving free writing lessons. Thanks!