The Official Writing Challenge
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Where are the comments on this??!! This had me entirely, completely, and totally spellbound from the first word to the last! I don't think I blinked, or breathed, the whole time I was reading this. Your descriptions are so vivid and detailed. This is definitely a masterpiece.
Wow! This was scary, but wonderful. I love the questions the leader asked Omani and the cliffhanger ending. Great work.
I was spellbound. Good work. Blessings, Cheri
This is captivating. You had me glued to the chair for the whole story. This is one of my favorites... Thanks for sharing.
One of my favorites too!
I wanted the story to continue into the next chapter. Very classy.
Took my breath away as well. The action was intense and swept me away with it. Marvelous storytelling.
Awesome story with a powerful message -- and so wonderfully written, too! Thank you for sharing your gift.
Yes, what a gift you have with words! This is amazing!