The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/06
Where are the comments on this??!! This had me entirely, completely, and totally spellbound from the first word to the last! I don't think I blinked, or breathed, the whole time I was reading this. Your descriptions are so vivid and detailed. This is definitely a masterpiece.
12/11/06
Wow! This was scary, but wonderful. I love the questions the leader asked Omani and the cliffhanger ending. Great work.
12/11/06
I was spellbound. Good work. Blessings, Cheri
12/11/06
This is captivating. You had me glued to the chair for the whole story. This is one of my favorites... Thanks for sharing.
12/13/06
One of my favorites too!
I wanted the story to continue into the next chapter. Very classy.
12/13/06
Took my breath away as well. The action was intense and swept me away with it. Marvelous storytelling.
12/13/06
Awesome story with a powerful message -- and so wonderfully written, too! Thank you for sharing your gift.
12/14/06
Yes, what a gift you have with words! This is amazing!