The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
Very well done! I loved the story, and God's marvelous "voice". It's really hard to reach a community for Christ from behind the walls of the church — so I appreciated the message too!
12/10/06
Such a wonderful voice. Love the title, and how expertly you wove it throughout the story. The only "weakness", if you could call it that, was that I felt like your statements about the pastor remembering he had just prayed for what was happening were unnecessary(my opinion only) - I feel like the actions spoke for themselves. I really enjoyed this!
12/11/06
Jefferson and Robert Lee, Jr. - perfect names! I love this piece, especially because I often catch myself trying to do His job! Nice work. Blessings, Cheri