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Two beggars traveling the straight and narrow road to heaven...very creative; but where is the topic? I'm looking for a pastor. Very well written however.
This story really came alive for me--great dialogue and vivid descriptions of the road, clothes of the characters, and so on. I could see, hear, and feel with them, and it surprised me when I found out the story was allegorical. An unexpected twist, but effective!
Very nicely written story. Thanks for sharing it.
One disciple leading another... beautiful picture. Though not directly, I believe this does illustrate the topic of pastor. A pastor is a shepherd who leads sheep. We are all a leader to someone in this life. And we are all a follower of someone else. Nicely done. Blessings, Cheri
Oh, I have goosebumps! Excellent!! Love it love it love it! A winner.
What an amazing word picture/parable. I loved this. I agree it was likely a bit weak on topic, but an amazingly well-written piece. Thank you for sharing!