The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an excellent poem, fun to read and with a great message.
12/09/06
Excellent message expressed so beautifully and poignantly. I was moved.
I really enjoyed this. It reminded me of another FWer's work. :-) Great job!
I loved the poem.It brought back memories of when I was transformed.
12/10/06
This is absolutely lovely. A really wonderful poem. Well done.
12/11/06
Great story of God transforming a life. I loved the flow of the rhythm and rhyme - uninterrupted - nothing to distract me from your message. Good work!
12/11/06
I loved the rythym and cadence of your poem. And such a good message of hope and salvation. Good work. Blessings, Cheri
Such a fun read & delightful poem!
I am in awe of all who can write poetry. I liked the lilting tone, ... a great way to tell a real tale worthy of a ballad.
12/11/06
Excellent! It's a veritable ballad, should be sung. Very, very good.
I LOVE this. Excellent rhyme and meter, and so much fun to read as well. It is like a folk story in rhyme. Very well done.
12/13/06
Wonderful message, beautiful words. I enjoyed this!
12/13/06
A great poem and a great story. The rhyme and meter are outstanding. I could imagine this being read aloud on stage. Fabulous!
Great writing. Congratulations!