The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
Engrossing descriptive writing – very well done. I was a little surprised that you didn’t explore the more overtly spiritual side of the pastor’s work in terms of Bible teaching and moral regeneration. But the emphasis you placed certainly presented him as someone whose sacrificial heart we would all do well to emulate
12/09/06
Great descriptions, and I felt as if I got to know this godly man.
12/10/06
Was this set in Tiajuana?(sp?) You sure described it to a tee. Very nice job. God bless.
12/11/06
I was drawn to this particular short story because of your title but your writing held my attention fully. Great job!