The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
Wonderful--but keep going! I want them to get married!
12/10/06
This has to be written by one of my favorite writers here. very nice job. Kept me reading all the way through. Very endearing characters and well developed. Not many stories get me so involved with its characters. Super job. God bless.
12/11/06
There is a very big difference between a man who stands behind a pulpit and preaches distanced from intimate contact with his people and a man who is a shpehrd of the flock. This is the picture of a shepherd. Good job.
12/12/06
I really like how this was laid out - very fine detail and the characters were very well developed. Took me back to where I used to live and several pastors I knew there. Nice writing!