The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 774 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
04/11/05
This was a creative take on the topic and I loved the story of a teacher who made such a difference in the lives of the students. There were quite a few grammar errors in the story. Even with those, it was good, but they did distract a bit. Your story would be even better if those were corrected. You have an interesting subject here and I enjoyed reading.
Enjoyed your article very much! I really liked how you wrote with such respect for the teacher. Something lacking in our society today. Great job!
04/11/05
I love how you held the teacher up and in such high esteem - we need that still.
04/14/05
She sounds like not only a wonderful teacher, but a wonderful person as well!
04/16/05
I grew up in a very small school... I can relate to the whole school in a baseball game concept. Great description of the teacher and relationships!