The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/06
The poetic prayer is heartfelt and beautifully written. Many lovely thoughts and phrases here.

I don't think you need the asterisks--maybe just bold the first letters to make the acronym obvious? Also, usually in an acronym poem there's a close relationship between the word you use and the content of the poem. Perhaps a sentence explaining that this is the prayer of a pastor's heart?

I loved the repetition of "Please God"--just so genuine and touching.
12/08/06
I enjoyed this prayer. My only suggestion is to tie the subject more into the prayer itself. I would have loved to have seen this done with the prayer being one of a pastor for his flock, his ministry, etc. This was well written. Thanks for sharing it!
12/09/06
Great concept. I really liked the poem. Just a couple little things already mentioned above and this would be outstanding. Keep up the good work. You're a blessing. God bless.