The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/06
So sad ... and very touchingly written. Well done.
12/01/06
Oh, how touching! The twist you put on that letter moved this story from tender to spectacular.
12/02/06
You gave the reader a slice of the pain the soldiers suffer in the war and how the wounds leave them physically and emotionally. Your writing brought home vividly the injustice of war.
12/02/06
A sweet story well told.
12/03/06
The ending was so, so powerful and unexpected (to me, anyway!). Such an amazingly vivid and engaging portrait of this life. Bravo!
12/04/06
I felt like I was right there in the hospital with our little volunteer. I was just as surprised as she to learn that Will had no family. Great writing! Blessings, Cheri
12/05/06
Very real story of the volunteers that just kept working, spreading cheer and help where they could. Well done.
12/05/06
This is so lovely and touching. What a wonderful story and it really touched my heart. So well done. Thanks for sharing
12/05/06
This was so beautifully written, with a completely unexpected ending. You totally captured my attention. Bravo!
12/06/06
This could/should be a movie. Excellent job as always. I'm honored to of been part of your clue in hinting/hinging. This is why I love to read. God bless.
12/08/06
Congratulations, Ann. A beautiful haunting piece. I love the way you ended it with her getting on with the job.