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Great story! Very creative. I like the formatting.
I would love to hear MORE about these people! You definitely whet my curiousity. I am so drawn to these characters. Wonderful writing.
Oooh, good job! Reminds me of the writing of Orson Scott Card. This one needs to be expanded.
I'd love to know how you came up with those names! ;) I'm wondering about the line when you said "this is the true story" ... threw me for a loop when it was sci-fi. Maybe it could read "this is the story"? Just a suggestion. Loved how he followed Christ's example and then brought his family with him later. Good work.
Very creative and shows wonderful imagination. It definitely took me to another time and place--very effective writing. Blessings~
A wonderful story. Very descriptive and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing this.
Well you got me wanting more. Excellent job. I love it. God bless.
This did remind me of Brother Card. Very well written. I think the beginning is perfect. To the character and his decendents, this was a true story. Loved the creativity and character development of your piece. Bless you for writing this!
Very creative. I love the parallel of Hanturach and Jesus. Nice work. Blessings, Cheri