The Official Writing Challenge
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12/01/06
This starts out wonderful, and just gets better and better. I found the last 5 or 6 stanzas particularly moving, and the last line was the real kicker. Beautiful!
12/01/06
Such strong images and vivid descriptions. This moved me in so many ways.
12/04/06
A superb message! So often we fail to understand that serving can be done through praying as well as doing. And so often our failure to understand causes us to miss His call.

I love this stanza in particular:
I fast and finally just obey
You’ve made it plain; I’ll walk Your way
My now adjusted willful ears
Improve my VISION -- plain and clear

Good job! Blessings, Cheri