The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/06
Clever! You fooled me right to the end. I like it!
12/01/06
Clever!

Just idle curiosity--how can a mouse's knees knock?

I love the pun in your title.
12/01/06
So clever! I also didn't get it until the end. Your title is purrfect (LOL sorry!). Great dialogue too.
12/04/06
Very clever. I enjoyed reading this piece.

Some spacing between dialogue would make it a bit easier on the eyes as one reads. And I was left wanting to know more about Daphne.

Blessings, Cheri