The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/06
Good writing on a devastating topic. Thank you for the resource you included.
Powerful story. A bit of a critque--near the beginning when the nurse spoke to the MC, telling her the girl was ready to be transported, I was a bit confused at first because you never said who was speaking. However, that is a minor thing in a well-written entry. What a difficult but blessed job God has called you to.
12/01/06
Oh, my! What a story. When we volunteer for the Lord, we have no idea what we might end up doing do we? Thanks for revisiting that time in your life and sharing it with others.
Great story, glad you were there for her. Well written.
12/03/06
This is so, so extremely powerful! Your title is perfect, and your description is amazingly vivid. I was feeling for this girl so deeply.
I enjoyed the story. It touched me deeply and I read it easily. I appreciate the informatin at the end. What a great Volunteer enrty!'InHim, Leigh