The Official Writing Challenge
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Very moving — wish I could know how the sons reacted when they read, and understood, the letter. Good job.
Nice letter, but I too would like to know how the sons reacted; and wondered if he ever reached out to see if he could talk to many questions, but not enough room in a Post Script. Masterfully written...
Love this approach to this topic. I also would have loved to know the reaction - but I feel it is a stronger piece for you NOT sharing that information with us. I love your conversational style.
This leaves me saying "Wow". What an incredibly cool approach and perspective to this topic. There were so many great phrases, and "aaahhh" moments. I loved it from beginning to end. You leave so much to our imaginations in regards to the way the sons would respond. Maybe you can work the sequel into a future topic? I will be on the lookout. Great job.
Seems to me you might just have the beginnings for a good book here. So many are left wondering how the sons responded... Food for thought. Great job! Blessings, Cheri