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11/23/06
I like the "commercial" twist at the end — Mastercard will be jealous they didn't think of it. I loved this line: " No matter how they came into the world, she was now a mother!" How true and well done!
11/27/06
Loved the real, raw emotions in this - and ADORED the ending. Bravo!
11/28/06
Awesome job! Just welcomed twin grandsons into our little family, so that part was extra special.

And I love the ending as well!

Cheri
11/29/06
You certainly have an insiders point of view on this topic! ;) You showed the new mom's fears very well.