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This is so sweet. I like how you contrasted your parents's past life in the security of the cottage and the peace they got with out modern day conveniences and yours with modern-day technology and the stresses and anxieties of the present. You have shown well that the Bible is the tool we need.
11/25/06
Oh how I loved this restful, peaceful "yesteryear" story! So true, and brought back memories of another time when things were easy, tranquil, and brought me up to the present with the violence, etc, etc. Loved it! Nicely done! Good job!
I really enjoyed this. The contrast of home is excellent. My favorite line was "They never needed to." That spoke of the parents' relationship eloquently.
11/29/06
How I would love to spend a few evenings in that cottage enjoying the peace and quiet with a book and a fire! It sounds absolutely wonderful!