The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/06
Wow, such a wonderful story of our Father in heaven! Loved it! And such a touching ending...great job and written well except for one little typo. Great stuff here! Kudos!
11/28/06
You are so on target with these candid shots. How our Father must grieve. You've done a good job illustrating this message and the end is eloquent in itself. "A little child shall lead them".
11/28/06
Yes, the little child at the end was the perfect touch. Great stuff.
11/30/06
This was brilliant... I could see a very young me in the little girl :) I really enjoyed this and I think you may be onto a winner here.