The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/06
Wow, such a wonderful story of our Father in heaven! Loved it! And such a touching ending...great job and written well except for one little typo. Great stuff here! Kudos!
You are so on target with these candid shots. How our Father must grieve. You've done a good job illustrating this message and the end is eloquent in itself. "A little child shall lead them".
11/28/06
Yes, the little child at the end was the perfect touch. Great stuff.
11/30/06
This was brilliant... I could see a very young me in the little girl :) I really enjoyed this and I think you may be onto a winner here.