The Official Writing Challenge
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11/23/06
Nicely done. I hope we all get to love like she did as we grow older.
11/27/06
This brought tears to my eyes. The lessons we can learn from the older generation - and so hard to say good-by to them. Lovely piece.
11/27/06
Lovely, smooth, subtle. Great writing delivered masterfully. Very nice job. God bless.
11/28/06
I lost my mom to cancer six years ago. She too was a role model. Your story touched me in a special way. Blessings, Cheri
11/28/06
Great last line! I almost wonder if something pulled from the last line would make a more apt title--this is such a lovely piece and the title just doesn't quite seem to match. Very, very nice.
11/29/06
I feel like I know this woman intimately - your description is absolutely wonderful and delightful and engaging. Masterfully done.