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11/25/06
Now I understand the Title was a typo - I kept wondering what Adopte meant? However, now that I have read it - I loved it! Such a beautiful story and so well told! Great job - and such a touching story!
11/28/06
Intriguing story. Held the interest, wanting to know how and why. I guessed towards the end what was coming and it made for a fitting conclusion.
11/28/06
I really enjoyed reading this. Just a little note: When a character's conversation continues over two or more paragraphs, you don't end the quotes in each paragraph, but you also need to start each paragraph with quotation marks to show that he is still talking. That confused me just for a second. I loved the references to the food throughout. Cute.
11/30/06
Definitely enjoyed this. Your dialogue is wonderful, and I love how you carried the story along on their walk - it made it feel so much more real! Great ending too!