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11/25/06
Such a sweet story with a good moral for all parents and also for the children. Life is what you make of it...and this was written very well. Thanks for sharing.
11/26/06
I loved this - I was totally engaged in this from beginning to end. Great detail and character development.
11/28/06
Excellent job, mid. Nice, smooth, well written, very polished. You captured the essence of parenting in a very sweet, innocent and delightful way. I am very impressed. A top notch story. You keep getting better and better. God bless.
11/28/06
Captivating story from start to finish. I'm a big nature girl, so the walk in the woods really spoke to my heart. I love to be outside and experience God's presence through nature. You captured that feel with such love and tenderness. Thanks for sharing.
11/28/06
As I read the little girls thoughts, they somehow seemed a little too grown up for her. I wonder if she would have thought all that through. But I loved how the mom and daughter connected at the end.
11/28/06
I really enjoyed this. It's very well written. Thanks for sharing!
11/29/06
A well-written article. I like how mother and daughter connected in the woods. The peace and mystery of the woods which you so skilfully brought to life gave the story an interesting dimension.
11/29/06
As always, your descriptions are just beautiful. This was a very sweet story with an easy flow. Very nicely done!
11/29/06
This was cute to read. Good job with the ending, I liked the happy note :)
11/29/06
Very touching and believable. You described both people very well. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing this.
11/30/06
superb...as always!
12/01/06
The beginning was a bit confusing for me, but once I caught on, I appreciated the perspectives of both mother and daughter. Taking time away from life is the key, isn't it? Enjoyable.