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Such a sweet story with a good moral for all parents and also for the children. Life is what you make of it...and this was written very well. Thanks for sharing.
I loved this - I was totally engaged in this from beginning to end. Great detail and character development.
Excellent job, mid. Nice, smooth, well written, very polished. You captured the essence of parenting in a very sweet, innocent and delightful way. I am very impressed. A top notch story. You keep getting better and better. God bless.
Captivating story from start to finish. I'm a big nature girl, so the walk in the woods really spoke to my heart. I love to be outside and experience God's presence through nature. You captured that feel with such love and tenderness. Thanks for sharing.
As I read the little girls thoughts, they somehow seemed a little too grown up for her. I wonder if she would have thought all that through. But I loved how the mom and daughter connected at the end.
I really enjoyed this. It's very well written. Thanks for sharing!
A well-written article. I like how mother and daughter connected in the woods. The peace and mystery of the woods which you so skilfully brought to life gave the story an interesting dimension.
As always, your descriptions are just beautiful. This was a very sweet story with an easy flow. Very nicely done!
This was cute to read. Good job with the ending, I liked the happy note :)
Very touching and believable. You described both people very well. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing this. always!
The beginning was a bit confusing for me, but once I caught on, I appreciated the perspectives of both mother and daughter. Taking time away from life is the key, isn't it? Enjoyable.