The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/06
Interesting title. I expected a more light hearted poem. But your message of compassion for the orphans is touching.
11/29/06
How much tragedy you conveyed in your poem. Your thoughts just flowed into an emotional release about the orphans of the world. Your rhyming scheme was very clever and tempered the seriousness of the poem a bit.
12/01/06
Sad, but true. Depressing to think that we do that to our own. Made me think.