The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/06
So much packed into such a short space! What a tragic and yet touching story! Of course it brought tears to my eyes...but all is well with the Lord in the end. Nice writing...and kept this reader's interest throughout. God bless.
11/28/06
Ouch! The reason for the adoption was so different from anything I could have predicted. Emily's reaction of confusion was realistic. Loved the song. Good work.
11/30/06
Very engaging - the reason for the adoption just slapped me in the face - it was completely unexpected. Excellent job!