The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/06
Nice. I liked the point of view you took to show the humanness of Christ, and also his family. Very cool.
11/30/06
This piece was so poetic - not just in form, but even in the wording. I'm not sure I caught it all, but interesting reading.
There are some lovely parental insights from childhood and adolescence, and I particularly like the climax regarding stars and the temple veil torn in two- hope I have remembered that correctly as it is noy on the screen a s I comment.
PS one typo on line four- you should be your I think.