The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/06
I would have like to read more. Your last line - 'Wiping from my face the salty brine of tears I dare look up into the face of the lifeguard that resuscitated my soul - my Savior.' oh so very true! He is our lifeguard!
11/20/06
I've read most of the entries this week, and there are several with quite similar themes--but this one...wowsers! This is the one to hold up as an exemplar of the "Jesus/God-as-lifeguard" take on the topic. Just beautifully done.
11/22/06
Strong message in a short story. Nicely done.
11/23/06
That twist at the end was very effective. Well done!