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11/17/06
I really like how you took "real-life" practical information and tied it into specific aspects of the Christian life. Great job.
11/20/06
What a clever idea!
11/20/06
I liked all the parallels you drew from the lifeguard rules and the 'life guard' rules. I'm not sure about the smoothness of the transitions from one to the other. Great thoughts though.
11/20/06
Love the praralells - well done!
11/20/06
Very creative take on the topic - I was definitely taken by surprise when you first introduced the "Jesus" tips - just love the parallels you made! Great job, Marty!
11/20/06
Very nice! I can see this being taught as a course in a Christian school! A lovely merger of true-life safety tips and Christian truths. Thanks for sharing this
11/20/06
Interesting treatment. This is lesson material - thank you for sharing.
11/21/06
A very creative way to share information that could help save lives and in more ways than one.