The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/05
Very nice! :-)

I wouldn't change a thing on this one.

01/24/05
Your piece spoke volumes to me. It was so simple, yet so profound. Contentment is so hard to achieve. It reminded me that I must cease striving in my own life and be still...wait and enjoy this wonderful journey we are all on. Thanks for the blessing!
01/24/05
loved the lung lines and being still... very good
01/25/05
Beautiful I enjoyed this very much.

Kathy
01/26/05
I always read poems out loud - helps me to concentrate. There are some nice thoughts and lines in here, which I appreciate. The rest is either too deep or too vague to strike a cord in me - which is the sign of a good poet, I think!
01/28/05
Be still
and breathe Him in,
now,

This line made me stop and think and take a deep breath of Him.

Thank you
01/28/05
I too like "Be Still" The very stillness is a time for meditation and thinking of Him. Nice poem.
I really liked this. God bless you.
Love it. It throws one off balance to step forward while looking backward -- too true. And always longing for something yet to come does keep contentment at bay. The conclusion, breathe Him in, be still -- just beautiful!