The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/06
Your opening was great, and your analogies of you and the lifeguard having the same job were good too.
11/21/06
It seems a rather "Ho-Hum" type of morning at the pool; however, point well taken. "Foot" disinfectant sounds a bit better to me than "feet"...but what do I know? I'm not in Masters. lol.
11/22/06
I like the way you use the everyday experience to explain spiritual truth.
11/22/06
Nice and easygoing read. I enjoyed this. Nice lessons. Thanks.
11/24/06
Thanks for the relaxed reminder to guard my heart. A pleasant change of pace from the more dramatic entries. :-) yeggy