The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/06
I enjoyed how you juxtaposed your poetry and prose - very effective. This was a tender story, and you did a great job of showing the progression of your MC's heart.
It is so sad to think of so many people who live every day like this, but so great to know they have Jesus to turn to.
I like how you entwined poetry throughout the entry. Touching article.
11/23/06
This was a beautiful reflection. I especially liked your paraphrase of the Psalm; nothing wrong with making Scripture match a personal situation.

Great job!