The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/06
Wow - this is very deep and atmospheric. I especially love the middle part with your juxtaposition of the positive and negative aspects of the water. Great read!
11/22/06
I like the way that you pointed out how something as simple as water can both bring life or cause death. It was thought provoking. Thank you.