The Official Writing Challenge
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11/16/06
oh dude! Here I was thinking that it was a perv or something...wow! Great job of stringing the reader along.
11/17/06
Yes, I see why this article was listed as a favorite, already. What a twist! What a roller coaster ride! I love it when I'm hooked into supporting the bad guy! You got me. Good job!
11/17/06
Pretty good story line albeit a bit predictable. Watch gerund openings - they kill a sentence.
Hook, line and sinker! You caught me. Nice take on the topic- out of the box and a nice change of pace. Awesome job.
11/19/06
Wow. This was great. I was fooled for sure. In fact, I'm STILL not sure if I know exactly what happened! lol