The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a great reminder about how God knows we're in trouble before we do, and is already on His way to save us.

The last two paragraphs in 1st person caught me a bit off guard, but I think they worked. Maybe starting out in 1st person, like the narrator is telling us a story, would help.

Over all though, a lovely image of God coming to rescue us before we know we need it.