The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/06
Good job! Readble, authentic voice, and a great story to tell. A few tweaks for punctuation and captitalization is all this needs--a really interesting narrative.
11/13/06
I LOVE your last paragraph especially. This felt so real to me - thank you for sharing your story in such an engaging, meaningful way!