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Beautifully written!
Great job with suspense here--all the time the doctor was recovering, I was thinking, "what about the baby?" Love this period piece, skillfully written.
Love the feel of the days of the pioneers. great job.
So this is how you do it. Subtle suspence. Your writing is so smooth it reads like a hot mug of honey tea. My only comment, is that at first I wasn't reading the doctor as being male. But, I didn't mind starting again because it is just so well written.
God bless.
Ahhh ... Ann ... I love your work.
Suspenseful, yet easy to read and engaging. This story is superb!
--a humbled writer.
So wonderful. I have no words, other than - wow! A masterpiece!
Excellent story! What a wonderfully told tale. I was drawn along with this and captivated by your way with words. Thanks so much for sharing this.
You have a real gift of putting the reader right into the midst of the setting. This was a very enjoyable read, and exceptionally well written.
I love prairie stories. I've added this to my fav's list.
Beautifully written, Ann. You are a gifted writer indeed.
Beautifully done, you are indeed one of the rarer talents on FW.