The Official Writing Challenge
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Ooh-Rah. I like it. Powerful.

God bless,

Kevin
11/09/06
Only one author would swear ...:) Welcome back. (I think) ;)
11/10/06
This is an excellent graphic depiction of facing eternity without having given all to Christ! I confess, I almost quit reading part way through, as I wasn't sure I wanted to expose myself to what I thought was coming! :0)
Yes, I think I know who write this, too!
Masterfully done & welcome back.
11/11/06
Bravo.. The title snared me in. The words kept me pealed. Aww but the ending.. Great job Bob..
Welcome back, indeed. 8-)
11/12/06
wow...
It is very plain to see why you are in masters. Excellent.
11/13/06
Incredibly masterful ...
11/13/06
I did find one thing ...
11/13/06
Cool ending!
11/13/06
Chills. I don't know what else to say, other than I think I need to read everything else you've written. No wonder you are in masters - you are truly deserving of the title BoB. Welcome back.
11/15/06
Gripping tale, neat twist at the end.
11/15/06
It definitely made me think, and it made me see the scene vividly. Well written. Thanks for sharing it,
11/15/06
Ah yes, Bob, I mean Maxx, I mean .. ah heck man, good to have you and your great talent back :D
What a master! This is a creepy, exciting story with a punch. Thanks.
11/29/07
Hi Maxx. I'm just editing the book this story will go in, and have to say this was an outstanding piece of writing. Physician heal thyself. You are, most definitely, a master of piercing the darkness.

Love, Deb