The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/06
A good message here for all. It seems so many set aside the one thing that can help them most in live. Pains, trials and tribulations we will always have, but went the Lord is in the center of our focus... what can stand against HIM.. Good job.
11/13/06
Oh, you definitely left me wanting more! If only more people could see this answer to their struggles! You did a wonderful job of characterization - it all felt very real and believable. Great story - I wanna know what happened to that woman!!
11/16/06
I like the way you got your message across in this parable-devotional. I've known people such as Susan, and your narrator did the essential. He took the bull by the horns and got real with her. Thank you for this good read.