The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, this is good! Unfortunately, it's also a sad commentary on our society. I like the format. You hooked me right away. Nicely done.
Very clever. May we all be as "deluded" as Ms. Harper.
11/16/06
Very sad but very well written. Congrats on your win.
11/16/06
Congratulations on your win! Wow! What a sobering article, indeed. Such a dark commentary on today's society although, unfortunately, I can testify that this is not too far-fetched. Great writing--no wonder it placed! Congratulations once again! :)
11/16/06
Really 'enjoyed' reading this provoking story. Great format. consistent voice. You made me care for the MC. Well done and congratulations.
I read this with a lot of interest. You accurately captured the voluntary ignorance of some doctors. Congratulations for the win.