The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, wow! That ending blew me away! You couldn't find a more well-written illustration of "grace." Superb writing that will stay with me for a long time.
What an immensely powerful story - with, as previously stated, an amazing ending!
If only we could all (I'm thinking of myself here) have such a massive dose of God's grace for those He still loves, despite their sins.

Thanks, and God bless,

The ending made me GASP. This is SO powerful, and such a testimony to everyone. I was compelled from beginning to end, and humbled. Absolutely masterful in its writing AND message!
That gave me goosebumps. What more can I say? What a lesson.
An unbelievable testimony of grace. How like his Father he seemed. Thank you for a story that burst forth, grew legs and walked across my heart!