The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I love this! What a beautiful reminder of where our Hope truly lies.
11/13/06
Poetry is definitely not my forte, but this flowed so well and the cadence is so consistent and balanced. On top of that, the message was wonderfully constructed.

Usually if a poem doesn't flow well in the first stanza, I don't continue, but this one sucked me in and, before I knew it (or wanted) it was over.
11/13/06
Please post more of your poems at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/
11/14/06
Extremely well done. Rhythm and meter=A; Subject matter=A; Poetic ability=A+. Nice job - great style. A real, genuine Poet!
Yes, the appealing flow of your rhythm and rhyme carries us right into the beautifully made point at the end. Very well done!