The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
Man! I thought the teacher was actually in there sniffing glue!! I was thinking - ok, that's really out of the box ... Poor lady sounds like she needs a vacation! Hilerious.
11/05/06
Ditto the above comment. Poor lady has stooped to sniffing. Ha ha. This was a delightful read. Loved the wit and the fast pace. Written well also, and such a nice ending. Kudos.
11/06/06
This was wonderful! Your descriptions actually breathed life! Great word choices:) Perfect ending. I would not change a thing!
11/06/06
Well done. I loved your descriptions.
How did I miss this one? It's absolutely delightful! The description is excellent. Last week I substituted in a 10th grade chemistry class while students did experiments with glass beakers and hot plates. I wanted to hide under a lab table, but I needed to see that they didn't set each other on fire...or me!
11/10/06
Absolutely delightful. Grabbed and maintained my attention through to the end.