The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/06
What a unique approach. It was really effective to get to the end and realize that this was set back 2000 years ago and who the characters really were.

Well done!
11/05/06
Agreed...what a unique approach! Very creative! Makes me think of how this, perhaps, gets played out in our day to day lives...someone getting an undeserved promotion at work, etc. You made this a "today" story, though it's 2000 years old. thanks!
I like your approach to this subject. You made it relevant to today and yet it happened so long ago. Well done.
Surprise! Wow, I didn't see it coming! Nice way to bring history right up front and personal. :-)