The Official Writing Challenge
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11/04/06
Now we understand why Miss Wakefield's class gave no trouble. Her sincerity in her teaching extended to her children's welfare and future. Yes, she did put their dreams in her box and prayed for them. Exceptionally good article.
11/05/06
Lovely.

I think Miss Wakefield changed names after being my first grade teacher.
11/08/06
So, so beautifully done. Perfect ending - and I loved everything else too! Fine job!
I was caught up by the visual image of the box...and the story held me all the way! I believed that it held laughter, silly songs, and daydreams at first....so was wow-ed to learn it really held prayer-bathed visions of success.

Good job!

I know you must know about the word repetition: "the light from the light from the window" - just a typo.